English Grammar / Spelling Patch

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part 2.

6, show me, what -> no comma + only in complete solitude _do_ people reach
7, where are we -> where we are
8, kronberg -> I think castle kronberg would be better. I actually had to think if kronberg's even a real place in the game, I was sure they meant greenwort. (sure, it's written in the top left corner when I'm at the main castle but it's not that obvious.)
9, same as the unsigned: the kordar -> kordar
10, king Kerus -> King Kerus

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part 3.

11, two-handled -> two-handed + dragons blood -> dragons' blood
12, any apology -> an apology
13, to say goodbye -> say goodbye
14, more than thousand -> more than a thousand

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1, dozen of -> dozen
2, make me -> made me + come, comma
3, in searching -> searching for
4, captain -> Captain + its -> it's
5, Of couuurse nooo -> of couuurse nooot

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6, islands of freedom -> the islands of freedom (line 4)

there also seems to be some inconsistency with gizmo/gismo, one of lina's powers. I was pretty sure it's gizmo but in one of the battles I noticed it was called gismo (see 7.jpg). I checked the game files and it looks like it's called gizmo in the code but the in-game name's supposed to be gismo, though in one of the conversations it's also gizmo. I'd personally go with gizmo.

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1, in hands -> in the hands
2, the huge -> a huge
3, the highlighted text could be one paragraph
4, no need for a comma after but
5, brave men as you -> like you

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6, a women -> a woman
7, magic tower -> the magic tower
8, here there lives one artist -> there lives an artist

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a few more before I move on to the elven lands.

9, the griffin's -> the griffins'
10, could -> can
11, to this -> with this
12, griffin's king -> the griffin king or the griffins' king
13, a picture -> the picture