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1, dozen of -> dozen
2, make me -> made me + come, comma 3, in searching -> searching for 4, captain -> Captain + its -> it's 5, Of couuurse nooo -> of couuurse nooot |
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#2
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6, islands of freedom -> the islands of freedom (line 4)
there also seems to be some inconsistency with gizmo/gismo, one of lina's powers. I was pretty sure it's gizmo but in one of the battles I noticed it was called gismo (see 7.jpg). I checked the game files and it looks like it's called gizmo in the code but the in-game name's supposed to be gismo, though in one of the conversations it's also gizmo. I'd personally go with gizmo. |
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#3
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1, in hands -> in the hands
2, the huge -> a huge 3, the highlighted text could be one paragraph 4, no need for a comma after but 5, brave men as you -> like you |
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#4
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6, a women -> a woman
7, magic tower -> the magic tower 8, here there lives one artist -> there lives an artist |
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#5
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a few more before I move on to the elven lands.
9, the griffin's -> the griffins' 10, could -> can 11, to this -> with this 12, griffin's king -> the griffin king or the griffins' king 13, a picture -> the picture |
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#6
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14, will observe -> observe (although
15, the huge egg -> a huge egg (right click on the griffin egg found in the cave) 16, magic power -> the magic power |
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#7
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1, world of death -> land of death
2, if I got -> if I get 3, necrocom castle -> castle necrocom 4, will listen -> listen and one more in eng_chat_1660253872_1032973069.lng. I forgot to take a shot and couldn't get the conversation to appear again. What kind of a Tree it is? -> is it? |
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