Brothers Of The Sky Premiere TONIGHT!

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

Just to let you guys know, the first episode is going live tonight! So keep an eye out around 6PM!

[Reddisback]

Just to let you guys know, the first episode is going live tonight! So keep an eye out around 6PM!

Wich channel and what time Zone? :cool:

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

LOL, its GMT 6PM and on the Xbox360DIY YouTube Channel. Unfortunately not on real tv :(, when its up, i'll put a link here :D

[FOZ_1983]

Should be good, i look forward to the link

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

First Episode!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUktTJdDRbg

[Reddisback]

err.. mate, May i make an opinion?

Y'know, Your intro look alot like that of Brothers in Arms.

but notheless, Top job you got there. Should I recommend you to Mr.Spielbergh? ;)

Edit: Here's the Intro of BIA. It was my Honor to Moderate it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4E_Kzi9bFVc

[Hrok81]

Nice job dude!
Makes me want to play...have no time...aaargh

[FOZ_1983]

Might want to edit the start a bit, the pic of a spitfire and hurricane looks a bit poor (outlines visible etc) also whoevers talking... talks FAR TO MUCH and really quietly, can hardly hear them.

At 3.30, we hear the guns shooting before we even saw the target, its only when the target was hit did we realise what was in your sights. (i might be nit picking here)

At 4.10 your shooting at a HE111, granted you destroy it (good kill :) ) but look how much damage you took, shouldnt really of been dead on his 6. (again maybe nit picking)

At 4.50, same as above. (again im prob nit picking) Oil on cockpit looked good though, well caught.

At 6.37 after landing the hurricane it would of been nice to see the battle scared hurrie maybe either land on grass or taxi onto the grass away from the main runway (nit picking i know)

At 6.50 the spitfire is a mess!!!! haha i like it, great stuff. Good touch

At 8.40 an nice crash landing, minimal damage done though runway is now out of use until its cleaned up lol.

At 8.50 onwards, again its hard to hear whats being said but could just be my speakers?? even though all sound is up to 100% and the talking goes on a while. They sound a little "young" to if that makes sense?? (again i could be nit picking)



On the whole its an ok clip, was nice to see the hurricane take a pounding and still make it back in one piece!! thats what we like to see :D

10/10 for effort.

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

Might want to edit the start a bit, the pic of a spitfire and hurricane looks a bit poor (outlines visible etc) also whoevers talking... talks FAR TO MUCH and really quietly, can hardly hear them.

At 3.30, we hear the guns shooting before we even saw the target, its only when the target was hit did we realise what was in your sights. (i might be nit picking here)

At 4.10 your shooting at a HE111, granted you destroy it (good kill :) ) but look how much damage you took, shouldnt really of been dead on his 6. (again maybe nit picking)

At 4.50, same as above. (again im prob nit picking) Oil on cockpit looked good though, well caught.

At 6.37 after landing the hurricane it would of been nice to see the battle scared hurrie maybe either land on grass or taxi onto the grass away from the main runway (nit picking i know)

At 6.50 the spitfire is a mess!!!! haha i like it, great stuff. Good touch

At 8.40 an nice crash landing, minimal damage done though runway is now out of use until its cleaned up lol.

At 8.50 onwards, again its hard to hear whats being said but could just be my speakers?? even though all sound is up to 100% and the talking goes on a while. They sound a little "young" to if that makes sense?? (again i could be nit picking)



On the whole its an ok clip, was nice to see the hurricane take a pounding and still make it back in one piece!! thats what we like to see :D

10/10 for effort.
thanks for all the comments guys , and yeah i'm 15 so the voices probably do sound a little young!

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

however, the spit was meant to take a pounding, as that was the story for the episode.

[FOZ_1983]

however, the spit was meant to take a pounding, as that was the story for the episode.

It took a pounding alright lol. Looked good.


As for being 15... yeah that does explain the young voice lol.

[Reddisback]

It took a pounding alright lol. Looked good.


As for being 15... yeah that does explain the young voice lol.


On your Youtube vid i thaught you were older?

[FOZ_1983]

On your Youtube vid i thaught you were older?

To be honest i had no idea how old he was. I assumed he was older...alot older when he mentioned writing a column for a posh upperclass paper.


Didnt actually know he was 15. Do now though :D

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

To be honest i had no idea how old he was. I assumed he was older...alot older when he mentioned writing a column for a posh upperclass paper.


Didnt actually know he was 15. Do now though :D
lol thanks

[FOZ_1983]

No probs :P

[mattd27]

I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro. :) Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.

I'd definitely like to see another episode. :)

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro. :) Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.

I'd definitely like to see another episode. :)
thanks for the constructive criticism, I will try to make the diaries shorter, and thats a killer sig. btw :D

[FOZ_1983]

gameguy, you have a great sig yourself (i remember you taking it for that epic pic thread). Should make it a little bigger, or even better get a couple of hurricanes flying together past the cliffs!! now thats an epic pic then. You've got mates who will fly with you no doubt :D

So whens the next vid due out?


I agree though, matt has a great sig.

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

gameguy, you have a great sig yourself (i remember you taking it for that epic pic thread). Should make it a little bigger, or even better get a couple of hurricanes flying together past the cliffs!! now thats an epic pic then. You've got mates who will fly with you no doubt :D

So whens the next vid due out?


I agree though, matt has a great sig.
It's annoying I can't make it bigger :( and everytime I try to it's just the same size. What size is yours Foz? And yeah that would be pretty cool. The next episode is due out next Tuesday, I'm going to try keep these a weekly thing :D and it's nice I am considered a mate, feelings mutual :D

[FOZ_1983]

It's annoying I can't make it bigger :( and everytime I try to it's just the same size. What size is yours Foz? And yeah that would be pretty cool. The next episode is due out next Tuesday, I'm going to try keep these a weekly thing :D and it's nice I am considered a mate, feelings mutual :D

Do you have the pic saved to your pc? a bigger size than it is now?

[FOZ_1983]

if you have the pic saved to your pc/laptop and its a bigger size (like you would like for your sig) then just upload it to www.photobucket.com and then when you edit your sig on here, use the img link from photobucket and your sig will be a decent size :D

[FOZ_1983]

Here's a new one im toying with using, though i really like the one i have :( This one would need editing a bit though, more than simply "star foz" written in the bottom corner.


http://i809.photobucket.com/albums/zz16/FOZ1983/Theguardians-1.jpg

[mattd27]

You guys can thank dazz for my sig, I still want to know where he gets the pictures for his sigs, they're epic. :) The funny thing is I was only going to use his as a short term one until I could get around to make a new one, but I don't think I can let it go now. :D

Why do so many threads get dragged off topic into talking about sigs? lol

[Robotic Pope]

I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro. :) Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.

I'd definitely like to see another episode. :)

I agree with him. Its a good start for your series. The actual video was good, but the intro was too long and rather mumbled which made it hard to make out the words.
Oh by the by, your American accent in that previous vid was alot better than your 1940's English Accent which almost sounds american itself.

[trk29]

Very nicely done enjoyed the music also.

[phlux]

Well done man. Might I suggest for the next episode, just for the sake of filming, perhaps turn the HUD all the way off and fly it in realistic mode so you can get some outside views of the aircraft. Another perspective couldn't hurt. Anyway, great job.