The Dover Chronicles

[Redroach]

Originally Posted by Srinidhalaya

Thanks for the translation corrections! I know about 2 actual words in german, other than that I'm relying on internet translator :/

Thanks for the encouragement guys! The conclusion should be coming soon (along with the translation hotfix's)

Nooooo! leave it the way it is, please! As I said on pg 1, it has its special charm(e?)!

[Srinidhalaya]

Nooooo! leave it the way it is, please! As I said on pg 1, it has its special charm(e?)!

So the translations can be read? Not just nonsense? More of a "obvious your not German" kinda thing?

[SNAFU]

Well, it is understandable for a native german speaker. It gives the artwork a funny touch though, as if a the pilots are from the foreign legion, if you know what I mean. It puts a smile on your face, especially the "wir sind betroffen" (that would mean, "it concerns us", but I guess you mean "wir sind getroffen", that would be "we are hit")

So as I said, too, leave it like its is, it has its own charme and fits a comic, but if you do want to have it perfectly straight and clean... your choice, I like it the way it is...

[FG28_Kodiak]

Ich bin auch immer sehr betroffen, wenn ich getroffen werde.

[Redroach]

Originally Posted by Srinidhalaya

So the translations can be read? Not just nonsense? More of a "obvious your not German" kinda thing?

Not at all, its completely understandable - the latter part of your question applies. It's just wacky German and that's what makes it so great ^-^
Actually, I've seen many non-native Germans try hard to achieve that style, but they're mostly not as good as what you've done here by accident

[Srinidhalaya]

Thanks Red. I'll just keep on with what I'm doing. EDITED original post to add the exciting conclusion.

[Lololopoulos]

Originally Posted by Redroach

Nooooo! leave it the way it is, please! As I said on pg 1, it has its special charm(e?)!

Sure,but i would also like to know how to say things correctly in German as i‘m learning it.

[Srinidhalaya]

Episode 2: Operation Tarpon Hunt

Here is a preview. This episode will be released all at once, with this preview as an exception.

I'm changing a few small layout details to make it appear more of a comic (such as a border for each page). Recruited some help with the dialog as well, but don't worry it has nothing to do with translation...I'm just not a writer...

Image removed due to typo. Below is episode two.

[Redroach]

Ah, the new issue of "Dover Chronicles" is coming soon... ^-^