Brothers Of The Sky Premiere TONIGHT!

[FOZ_1983]

Originally Posted by ThatYoungGameGuy

however, the spit was meant to take a pounding, as that was the story for the episode.

It took a pounding alright lol. Looked good.


As for being 15... yeah that does explain the young voice lol.

[Reddisback]

Originally Posted by FOZ_1983

It took a pounding alright lol. Looked good.


As for being 15... yeah that does explain the young voice lol.

On your Youtube vid i thaught you were older?

[FOZ_1983]

Originally Posted by Reddisback

On your Youtube vid i thaught you were older?

To be honest i had no idea how old he was. I assumed he was older...alot older when he mentioned writing a column for a posh upperclass paper.


Didnt actually know he was 15. Do now though

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

Originally Posted by FOZ_1983

To be honest i had no idea how old he was. I assumed he was older...alot older when he mentioned writing a column for a posh upperclass paper.


Didnt actually know he was 15. Do now though

lol thanks

[FOZ_1983]

No probs

[mattd27]

I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro. Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.

I'd definitely like to see another episode.

[ThatYoungGameGuy]

Originally Posted by mattd27

I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro. Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.

I'd definitely like to see another episode.

thanks for the constructive criticism, I will try to make the diaries shorter, and thats a killer sig. btw

[Robotic Pope]

Originally Posted by mattd27

I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro. Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.

I'd definitely like to see another episode.

I agree with him. Its a good start for your series. The actual video was good, but the intro was too long and rather mumbled which made it hard to make out the words.
Oh by the by, your American accent in that previous vid was alot better than your 1940's English Accent which almost sounds american itself.