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Old 07-03-2014, 10:30 PM
Dohi64 Dohi64 is offline
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a few more before I move on to the elven lands.

9, the griffin's -> the griffins'
10, could -> can
11, to this -> with this
12, griffin's king -> the griffin king or the griffins' king
13, a picture -> the picture
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