Thread: English Grammar / Spelling Patch
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Old 07-03-2014, 09:21 PM
Dohi64 Dohi64 is offline
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1, in hands -> in the hands
2, the huge -> a huge
3, the highlighted text could be one paragraph
4, no need for a comma after but
5, brave men as you -> like you
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