Il2 1946: "Tempus Irae"

[Feuerbasis]

Hi folks,

my first attempt in video editing, I made a highlight video

for our beloved Il2: 1946.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-poty...64FAAAAAAAAAAA

Please, feel free to watch, rate and comment.


Thank you.

[HundertneunGustav]

First thoughts:
intro okay, if a little slow.
How you depicted the Mans last seconds - very , very good idea, close up and personal.
The memory flashes, the restricted Field of View, the thoughts about a wasted life, a struggle that led to nothing except death - good. It brings Essence to the Message you convey.
o fortuna... dark, good. a bit loud maybe.

The shooting... icons take away a lot of the feel
Effects: dark clouds disturb the Viewer, alert him and prepare him that this is not going to be a fun movie at all.
Well in line with your "all in vain" message.
also liked the red tulip, red like blood, red like death...

Outro: technically okay, but too long again, maybe cut that shorter, and display more credits at one time on the screen.

In one sentence: keep up the Pilots View stuff, the personal element, and the serious message. Cut the Icons, and maybe show us some more flying, and less intro/outro.
Disturbing little Video that reminded me that people actually DIED in those planes.

Good stuff

[rakinroll]

Good shootings, thanks.

[Feuerbasis]

Originally Posted by HundertneunGustav

First thoughts:
intro okay, if a little slow.
How you depicted the Mans last seconds - very , very good idea, close up and personal.
The memory flashes, the restricted Field of View, the thoughts about a wasted life, a struggle that led to nothing except death - good. It brings Essence to the Message you convey.
o fortuna... dark, good. a bit loud maybe.

The shooting... icons take away a lot of the feel
Effects: dark clouds disturb the Viewer, alert him and prepare him that this is not going to be a fun movie at all.
Well in line with your "all in vain" message.
also liked the red tulip, red like blood, red like death...

Outro: technically okay, but too long again, maybe cut that shorter, and display more credits at one time on the screen.

In one sentence: keep up the Pilots View stuff, the personal element, and the serious message. Cut the Icons, and maybe show us some more flying, and less intro/outro.
Disturbing little Video that reminded me that people actually DIED in those planes.

Good stuff

Hope you heared the voice talking...

Tell me how to cut icons (i got rid off all messages possible)

I fly closed cockpit, icons @ ~ 400 meters...but not full real (more like 95% full real server)


Contrucitve criticism, very welcome.