English Grammar / Spelling Patch

[Dohi64]

1, anything -> something
2, marshan swamp -> the marshan swamp (twice)
3, and once more here
4, cast -> casts
5, ok, comma

[Dohi64]

6, the kordar -> kordar
7, ardan's peak has some extra characters
8, enter arena -> enter the arena

[MattCaspermeyer]

Originally Posted by Dohi64

2, marshan swamp -> the marshan swamp (twice)

You know, I struggled with this at first - I was in the midst of changing all the "Marshan Swamp" texts to "the Marshan Swamp", but then I thought about it and it is like "Sherwood Forest".

We don't say "let's go to the Sherwood Forest", we say "let's go to Sherwood Forest". So even though at first it sounds better, "let's go to the Marshan Swamp" it is meant to be "let's go to Marshan Swamp".

So take both responses and put Sherwood Forest in place of Marshan Swamp:

"I think there's a place... the Temple of Deceased Souls in Sherwood Forest"

and

"The only temple I know is in Sherwood Forest, and..."

So even though at first it seems like "the" should go in front of Marshan Swamp, apparently it shouldn't.

At least that's my opinion, anyway...

/C\/C\

[Dohi64]

yeah, I've been thinking about the swamp thing for a while myself, then decided to mention it because in all other cases in the game it has 'the' before it. (and still, in the case of sherwood forest, it'd never occur to me to put 'the' before it but marshan swamp has a different sound to it I guess.) anyway, up to you.

the other thing bothering me is ha-ha vs. ha ha. I think it should be the former but it's usually the latter in the game - except in the first encounter in the dwarven lands (also pictured above because of another typo). it's just too much work to check everywhere, so I decided to ignore them.

[Dohi64]

next batch, part 1.

1, the -> a
2, so comfortable as it here in the mines -> as comfortable as it is here (50 hour and 60 hour should also be 50-hour and 60-hour)
3, submit -> submitted (I'd also leave out the second which and the comma before it)
4, well, comma + am I trying -> I am trying
5, no not -> no, not

[Dohi64]

part 2.

6, show me, what -> no comma + only in complete solitude _do_ people reach
7, where are we -> where we are
8, kronberg -> I think castle kronberg would be better. I actually had to think if kronberg's even a real place in the game, I was sure they meant greenwort. (sure, it's written in the top left corner when I'm at the main castle but it's not that obvious.)
9, same as the unsigned: the kordar -> kordar
10, king Kerus -> King Kerus

[Dohi64]

part 3.

11, two-handled -> two-handed + dragons blood -> dragons' blood
12, any apology -> an apology
13, to say goodbye -> say goodbye
14, more than thousand -> more than a thousand

[Dohi64]

1, dozen of -> dozen
2, make me -> made me + come, comma
3, in searching -> searching for
4, captain -> Captain + its -> it's
5, Of couuurse nooo -> of couuurse nooot

[Dohi64]

6, islands of freedom -> the islands of freedom (line 4)

there also seems to be some inconsistency with gizmo/gismo, one of lina's powers. I was pretty sure it's gizmo but in one of the battles I noticed it was called gismo (see 7.jpg). I checked the game files and it looks like it's called gizmo in the code but the in-game name's supposed to be gismo, though in one of the conversations it's also gizmo. I'd personally go with gizmo.

[Dohi64]

1, in hands -> in the hands
2, the huge -> a huge
3, the highlighted text could be one paragraph
4, no need for a comma after but
5, brave men as you -> like you