English Grammar / Spelling Patch

[MattCaspermeyer]

Originally Posted by Dohi64

happy to help, just be warned that it's gonna take a long while, judging from my progress so far.

edit: come to think of it, it might be better to release 1.2 sooner rather than later, that way I won't run into the same mistakes others have already found. or you could send over your updated file and I'd use that for the rest of my playthrough.

Don't worry - when I play it literally takes me half a year to finish (although most of that is because I'm modding as I'm playing).

I did put up V1.2, though, since I figured why not.

I'll wait, though, for all your comments before I do the next one...

Originally Posted by Dohi64

oh, and one more thing. the intellect tooltip is misleading, as I found out yesterday. it's not 10% spell damage increase after every 7 points but after every point. maybe it'd be a good idea to fix that as well.

I've been avoiding the can of worms of errata since it opens up a whole new level of effort. So I'll be sticking with just grammar errors.

Technically, the tooltip is correct, except that it omits the fact that you also get +1% for each point in Intellect (so once your Intellect reaches 7, for example, you'll have 7 + 10 = 17%).

However, if someone else wants to pick up the ball of fixing game errors in the *.LNG files, don't let me stop you.

/C\/C\

[Dohi64]

thanks! I understand about the tooltip thing, I was just surprised when I was looking up info on whether 0 int and 6 int make a difference (because according to the tooltip it doesn't) and found out that it does, a lot. I haven't noticed anything else in this repartment, but I was never one for formulas and stuff.

[Dohi64]

here's some more.

1: I'd put a comma after turned into a werewolf.
2: that he may -> so that he may
3: comma before the names.
4: a pain -> pain

[Dohi64]

and the rest I couldn't fit into the previous post.

5: I have now -> I have not
6-7: spiders underground -> Griffins' Underground (spiders' underground is in the forest)
7: begs -> begs for

[Dohi64]

1: please forgive me (comma) I will never steal again
2: I will fight the Keepers...
3: deserved -> deserve
4: taking -> having (it's in the forest)
5: a special -> the special

[Dohi64]

6: very dangerous -> a very...
7: designed -> was designed (or: 'a light and comfortable helmet, designed...')
8: nobleman -> a nobleman

[Dohi64]

a few more.

1, bosses combat -> boss combat
2, swear in the sunrays -> swear on + in the currents -> on the currents
3, in the waters -> on the waters (also, hunters-ships would be hunter-ships, I think)

and another one in eng_chat_0774567462_0173604358.lng, forgot to take a screenshot: the redbeard -> redbeard

[Dohi64]

the next batch.

1, the hoarse -> hoarse
2, do you -> can you + weird characters after the apostrophe
3, crown -> Crown (or Crown -> crown) to be consistent + attack duke's castle -> attack the duke's castle
4, griffins' -> the griffins'

also, in eng_quest_0435602476.lng it's supposed to be mano riveres, not rivers. at first I thought riveres was a typo and made a screenshot of that at another place but it turns out it's the other way around.

[Dohi64]

some more.

1, weird characters after apostrophe
2, the roast -> a roast
3, (when right clicking on lucky james' castle) the real -> a real
4, suggest -> suggests
5, allow to -> allow

[Dohi64]

1, signed _by_ the...
2, captain -> Captain (also in the same file, eng_chat_1825948338_0942664360.lng, Follow captain Wetbelly's ship... -> Captain)
3, didn't seen -> haven't seen
4, alright, comma