The Dover Chronicles

[Redroach]

Originally Posted by Srinidhalaya

So the translations can be read? Not just nonsense? More of a "obvious your not German" kinda thing?

Not at all, its completely understandable - the latter part of your question applies. It's just wacky German and that's what makes it so great ^-^
Actually, I've seen many non-native Germans try hard to achieve that style, but they're mostly not as good as what you've done here by accident

[Srinidhalaya]

Thanks Red. I'll just keep on with what I'm doing. EDITED original post to add the exciting conclusion.

[Lololopoulos]

Originally Posted by SNAFU

Nice work, mate

If you don´t mind a little rework, I would suggest to replace on

Page 7: Left bubble: "Wir sind getroffen" Right Bubble: "Wir sind unter Feuer" (We are under fire) or "Wir haben ein Feuer" (We have a fire here onboard)

Page 9: 109 jockey "Jetzt wirst du sterben, Tommy"

Page 10 "Jetzt habe ich Dich"

Otherwise it is quite charming the way it is now, keep it coming!

hahah coool! i was gonna ask how do you really say those things in German.
I'm glad we have a rather big german population in this forum.

[Lololopoulos]

Originally Posted by Redroach

Nooooo! leave it the way it is, please! As I said on pg 1, it has its special charm(e?)!

Sure,but i would also like to know how to say things correctly in German as i‘m learning it.

[Srinidhalaya]

Episode 2: Operation Tarpon Hunt

Here is a preview. This episode will be released all at once, with this preview as an exception.

I'm changing a few small layout details to make it appear more of a comic (such as a border for each page). Recruited some help with the dialog as well, but don't worry it has nothing to do with translation...I'm just not a writer...

Image removed due to typo. Below is episode two.

[Redroach]

Ah, the new issue of "Dover Chronicles" is coming soon... ^-^

[JG5_emil]

I love this pics

[Srinidhalaya]

Hey this thread survived the forum cleaning that just happened! Sweet.

A little hint about Episode 2; its based on the single player mission London Attack in single missions.

[Srinidhalaya]

The second episode is still coming, don't worry. Had to get some actual game time in, hence the delay...

[Srinidhalaya]

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