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Old 07-15-2014, 01:53 PM
Dohi64 Dohi64 is offline
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6, no one other -> no other (yeah, he speaks broken english but this somehow still bugs me )
7, of the huge, huge turtle -> of a huge...
8, made -> makes

the end, as far as I'm concerned
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