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Old 07-15-2014, 01:50 PM
Dohi64 Dohi64 is offline
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final batch, I've finished the game (it was awesome).

1, dragon's -> dragons' (as mentioned previously)
2, even won't -> won't even
3, titan/Titan inconsistency
4, what -> what's (2x)
5, bagud, comma (in the highlighted text)
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