next batch, part 1.
1, the -> a
2, so comfortable as it here in the mines -> as comfortable as it is here (50 hour and 60 hour should also be 50-hour and 60-hour)
3, submit -> submitted (I'd also leave out the second which and the comma before it)
4, well, comma + am I trying -> I am trying
5, no not -> no, not
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