Thread: English Grammar / Spelling Patch
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Old 06-04-2014, 10:06 PM
Dohi64 Dohi64 is offline
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here's some more.

1: I'd put a comma after turned into a werewolf.
2: that he may -> so that he may
3: comma before the names.
4: a pain -> pain
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