Thanks for pointing these out!
I implemented all the pictures per your suggestions and went with manage / falls on the 3rd one.
I'm not sure where the "first of all" is so I'll need a screenie of that one...
I have some more to review on my end and will work on getting a V1.2 out soon...
/C\/C\
P.S. Yep - that's cool with the dummy!
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Originally Posted by Dohi64
managed to find a few small mistakes.
also, thanks to this thread I found out you can do stuff with the princess dummy during training
1st pic: King Kerus instead of king Kerus
2nd: comma after wonderful + demon's instead of demons
3rd: managed/manage or falls/fell
4th: comma after well
5th: 'an' instead of 'the' would be better
and there was a first of all without a comma after it somewhere but I forgot to take a screenshot of it. |