managed to find a few small mistakes.
also, thanks to this thread I found out you can do stuff with the princess dummy during training
1st pic: King Kerus instead of king Kerus
2nd: comma after wonderful + demon's instead of demons
3rd: managed/manage or falls/fell
4th: comma after well
5th: 'an' instead of 'the' would be better
and there was a first of all without a comma after it somewhere but I forgot to take a screenshot of it.