Tricky sound editing, that's exactly it.. - It was unrelated chatter but I didn't find any good way to edit it out, with my rather modest skills. Thanks for your analysis, really interesting to read, because I get very little feedback like that. Any remarks on how you think the story could otherwise have been told are very welcome. I am having a lot of fun learning story-telling basics, and I'm certainly still a newbie in that field, which is fine, because it means there's only one way, namely UP!
