I have made a LOT of changes based on recommendations from the kind folks up at the Ubi Movie Makers Forum. It's under two minutes so I hope you'll watch it and either comment there or here. I really do want to know what you think!
Maybe Oleg will watch, 'eh? yea...I know, I know
Thank you!
You can watch it here in high quality:
http://deadmanwalkingproductions.blogspot.com/
Or here in low quality: