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Old 01-02-2012, 08:26 PM
DoolittleRaider DoolittleRaider is offline
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Very well done! Good cinematography and editing. The introductory Voiceover about the Spit is an interesting 'curtain-raiser'. A nice denouement in the final sequences/shots of downed acft... You've shown a variety of acft, angles, POV sequences, bomber gunner POV shots, etc..Interesting mix of cameras showing bomb explosions, targets,etc...

If possible, I would suggest you add overlaid or scrolling credits at the end, starting about 4:15. Credits include your (Director's) Name, Flight Sim used (COD of course) , capture and editing software (Fraps?, Virtual Dub?, Sony Vegas, whichever)... I have some minor constructive critiques/suggestions if you'd like. Just PM me.

One comment: I suggest you re-name your movie at youtube, perhaps as simply "Battle of Britain" as that is the title Text sequence when your movie begins.

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