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Originally Posted by mattd27
I liked the actual footage, it did a surprisingly great job telling the story in itself and it almost perfectly coincided with the information you had already told us with the intro.  Wasn't keen on the commentary, seemed to be rambling on a bit too much, but you still had the basic essence of the diary thing going well.
I'd definitely like to see another episode. |
I agree with him. Its a good start for your series. The actual video was good, but the intro was too long and rather mumbled which made it hard to make out the words.
Oh by the by, your American accent in that previous vid was alot better than your 1940's English Accent which almost sounds american itself.