Might want to edit the start a bit, the pic of a spitfire and hurricane looks a bit poor (outlines visible etc) also whoevers talking... talks FAR TO MUCH and really quietly, can hardly hear them.
At 3.30, we hear the guns shooting before we even saw the target, its only when the target was hit did we realise what was in your sights. (i might be nit picking here)
At 4.10 your shooting at a HE111, granted you destroy it (good kill
) but look how much damage you took, shouldnt really of been dead on his 6. (again maybe nit picking)
At 4.50, same as above. (again im prob nit picking) Oil on cockpit looked good though, well caught.
At 6.37 after landing the hurricane it would of been nice to see the battle scared hurrie maybe either land on grass or taxi onto the grass away from the main runway (nit picking i know)
At 6.50 the spitfire is a mess!!!! haha i like it, great stuff. Good touch
At 8.40 an nice crash landing, minimal damage done though runway is now out of use until its cleaned up lol.
At 8.50 onwards, again its hard to hear whats being said but could just be my speakers?? even though all sound is up to 100% and the talking goes on a while. They sound a little "young" to if that makes sense?? (again i could be nit picking)
On the whole its an ok clip, was nice to see the hurricane take a pounding and still make it back in one piece!! thats what we like to see
10/10 for effort.